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{Cherry} - London Dailey - The Lovely Petals Shoe
SHIKI - Shinichi Mathy = KYOTO dress
Donna Flora - Squinternet Larnia = OCCASUS Earrings and Ring
[e] Elikatira - Elika Tiramisu - Details - Red 07
[LeLutka]- Thora Charron - 2011 lashes/curl/touch me
Curio - Gala Phoenix - Petal [Light] Chic-Mode 2
Amacci- Carina Larsen - Gaze Eyes - Deep Green
This image – a night shot – turned out to be very good. Technically. Focus is spot on, colors and shadows are deep, the two flashes and the light mod has been brought out with near perfection. But the composition is bad. The eye does not know where to look at, there is no anchor, the eye is lost in a maze it does not find its way out. A compositional failure.
The pink one (made in Brazil) I got at Office Depot and the paper is very thin but still excellent with no feathering even with my gushiest flex nibs using thin, runny ink. Even though they weren’t on sale, I got a bunch of these.
The brown one (made in Egypt) I got at Staples. The paper quality is okay — not as good as the pink one but not as bad as some others I’ve relegated for use as scraps. But, I love the off-white cream paper with brown lines. I think, with a warm, dark red-brown ink and a needlepoint fountain pen, I could make this work.