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I was struck by the composition of these three lights at work, but didn't get it quite right.
I want to set up a long exposure shot of this using my tripod, Erin's 35mm f/1.8G prime lens and no flash.
THis will have to do for now.
Day twenty two of the #fmsphotoaday challenge for November.
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Competition: Still Life
Class: Intermediate Digital
Result: Highly Commended
Judges Critique:
Well titled. There are some gems within this composition, and I commend you for seeeing the potential - a ready made Still Life. A simple crop in from the right to eliminate the half bottle and what is behind it would tidy this up. However, I find this composition rather "busy" and wonder if standing more square on, just photographing the centre section with some of the dried corn and wheat as your right and left side would have more impact. Converting to the sepia tone was a very good idea and works well with the era. Well done