new iPhone 5s

Please critique my image and let me know what I did wrong/right.

Strobist info:

Bottle was placed in a homemade softbox with one shoplight positioned on each side with CFL bulbs.

LumoPro LP160 was placed about 1.5' overhead and set on 1/4 power with 24mm zoom.

Was fired with my on-camera flash which I had taped over with masking tape to diffuse.

I am new to off-camera flash photography so I am trying to learn all I can.

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More photos of his work

www.flickr.com/photos/torroid/sets/72157605742431618/

More poems on Valencia

boxerpress.typepad.com/boxer_press/2009/06/query-kate-is-...

ichbinimfluss.blogspot.com/2009/05/sidewalk-poetry.html

And in North Beach

carversdog.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/elvis-christ-and-the-...

Video of him

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Quality Street Pinhole Camera Portrait

Chemical splash technique

View On White

I ordered some new at www.washitape.ch

Working on a project for my fiance, this was one of the results.

More photos of his work

www.flickr.com/photos/torroid/sets/72157605742431618/

More poems on Valencia

boxerpress.typepad.com/boxer_press/2009/06/query-kate-is-...

ichbinimfluss.blogspot.com/2009/05/sidewalk-poetry.html

And in North Beach

carversdog.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/elvis-christ-and-the-...

Video of him

web.mac.com/jason_a_lee/iWeb/therabbles.com/Roundtable/3A...

iPhone 5s

palm leaf

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My Little Box tests et avis sur la box beauté et art de vivre

Q is for Quentin who sank in a mire.

Y is for Yorick whose head was knocked in.

sent to robin in usa

magazine and masking tape envelope

iPhone 5s

I have planned to add colour to some of my wooden rings. I have put masking tape around the sides of the ring so that I can paint one of the surfaces white. I like the idea of adding just one colour to one surface of the ring - it is just a slight expansion for me in using wood as a material in jewellery-making. I decided on white because I thought that it would look neutral next to the wood. I think that it adds a certain balance to the ring. For now, I used simple emulsion paint but in future, I think that I shall have to prime the wood and use a special paint for wood.

More photos of his work

www.flickr.com/photos/torroid/sets/72157605742431618/

More poems on Valencia

boxerpress.typepad.com/boxer_press/2009/06/query-kate-is-...

ichbinimfluss.blogspot.com/2009/05/sidewalk-poetry.html

And in North Beach

carversdog.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/elvis-christ-and-the-...

Video of him

web.mac.com/jason_a_lee/iWeb/therabbles.com/Roundtable/3A...

Right close up

www.momentstolivefor.com/blog/2013/10/diy-memory-game-wit...

More photos of his work

www.flickr.com/photos/torroid/sets/72157605742431618/

More poems on Valencia

boxerpress.typepad.com/boxer_press/2009/06/query-kate-is-...

ichbinimfluss.blogspot.com/2009/05/sidewalk-poetry.html

And in North Beach

carversdog.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/elvis-christ-and-the-...

Video of him

web.mac.com/jason_a_lee/iWeb/therabbles.com/Roundtable/3A...

Scrapbook page using TCW stencils and masking tape.

More photos of his work

www.flickr.com/photos/torroid/sets/72157605742431618/

More poems on Valencia

boxerpress.typepad.com/boxer_press/2009/06/query-kate-is-...

ichbinimfluss.blogspot.com/2009/05/sidewalk-poetry.html

And in North Beach

carversdog.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/elvis-christ-and-the-...

Video of him

web.mac.com/jason_a_lee/iWeb/therabbles.com/Roundtable/3A...

Launceston, Tasmania

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did i mention, that i like round things?

buttons, rings, maskingtape, a neat seal.

my fav poem:

I live my life in widening circles

that reach out across the world.

I may not complete this last one

but I give myself to it.

I circle around God, around the great tower.

I've been circling for thousands of years

and I still don't know: am I a falcon,

a storm, or a great song?

~ Ranier Maria Rilke ~