Terry_Lea
The Picnic
After confessing to Sassy that Karl the Karaoke crooner is actually her father, Maxine sobs uncontrollably. Hearing Maxine`s sobs, Karl has flashbacks to the day he left Maxine ...
It was a warm, sunny summer day and Maxine had asked Karl to bring her down to the riverside. She had prepared a picnic lunch with all of Karl`s favorites: peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, Nuttela on 12 grain bread and for dessert -- pecan pie. She so loved Karl, love to please him, loved being with him, loved talking to him. She did so much for Karl, he was practically treated like a king. Maxine was so blinded by love that she failed to notice that with all of Karl`s beautiful words, his actions didn`t back them up, such as taking Maxine home to meet his mother, something Maxine wanted so much. In reality Karl was only in it for himself and only himself. In fact, in Karl`s arrogance he prided himself in extracting such pleasure, such servitude from a lovely young lady as Maxine. He enslaved her heart and subjugated her to his will. He got a thrill from the power he had over her. "Treat a whore like a lady and a lady like a whore," his pappy would always say -- and the way he treated this beautiful young lady was proof Karl hung onto his Pappy`s every word. Little did Karl nor Maxine know that before that warm, sunny, pastoral day ended that both their lives would be terribly altered for life.
Unfortunately Karl never knew love nor understood it and mistook the loving actions of Maxine as being weak and pathetic. In fact he had become cloy with her constant doting and it was making him angry -- she was passionate in the sack and that was the only thing that kept him there. But there was a feeling that Karl had never felt before when Maxine was around, a feeling that Karl was too much of a coward to introspect on. It was the feeling of love, but for a guy like Karl, love can quickly turn to hatred … And an undeserving Maxine was about to become a target for that hatred.
Although Karl`s memory is vague, he can still hear Maxine`s words ring in his ears "Oh, baby, please, please pull out before you do -- we`re not protected."
Next Karl can hear himself thinking in response, "Hell with you b*tch I`m not pulling out now .. Protection`s your problem not mine!!"
Karl is yanked from his orgasmic fog by Maxine`s protest "Karl!!!! I asked you to pull out!! I said we are not protected -- It `s that time of the month! My God, Karl, I can get pregnant!"
Then Maxine sees the true Karl and becomes the object of Karl`s fury, "F^@k you B*tch you forgot to protect yourself but still want too get laid? I figured whores like you had that all figured out. Oh, don`t look so shocked. I can tell you`re a whore by the way you love it so and do it anyway I say. Puuuuuuhlease like I`m going to bring a slut like you home to my mother -- yeah right. In fact I`m surprised you even kiss your father with that mouth considering where it`s been. Puuuuhlease, you weren`t even that good either …. I can do better … I done with you … you`re disgusting … I`m out of here!"
With her heart broken by the vile words of Karl and his contemptuous selfish actions, rage wells up inside Maxine that makes her lash out at Karl by scratching his face and making it bleed and she screams, "KARL YOU BASTARD HOW CRUEL OF YOU!!!!" With that Karl, shocked that this bitch had the nerve to strike him, fills with such rage that his raw juvenile impulses can`t be controlled and in that instant a poor undeserving Maxine is subjected to something that she has never been subjected to before -- a violent closed fist beating. It was so violent that it left bruises on her eyes, a bloody nose and mouth and even broke her good luck horseshoe necklace. Luck for Maxine would not be around that day ...
As Karl leaves Maxine by the riverside taking his haughty strides back to his pickup truck, Maxine`s blames herself for the facial beating she took from Karl and pleads for him not to leave, pleas for explanations and even forgiveness go unnoticed. For Karl, it is only wailing sobs and cries that become his last memory of Maxine.
Karl can still hear Maxine`s pitiful cries of, "Kaaaaarrrrl! Come back! I`m sorry!!!!! Don`t leave meeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!"
The Picnic
After confessing to Sassy that Karl the Karaoke crooner is actually her father, Maxine sobs uncontrollably. Hearing Maxine`s sobs, Karl has flashbacks to the day he left Maxine ...
It was a warm, sunny summer day and Maxine had asked Karl to bring her down to the riverside. She had prepared a picnic lunch with all of Karl`s favorites: peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, Nuttela on 12 grain bread and for dessert -- pecan pie. She so loved Karl, love to please him, loved being with him, loved talking to him. She did so much for Karl, he was practically treated like a king. Maxine was so blinded by love that she failed to notice that with all of Karl`s beautiful words, his actions didn`t back them up, such as taking Maxine home to meet his mother, something Maxine wanted so much. In reality Karl was only in it for himself and only himself. In fact, in Karl`s arrogance he prided himself in extracting such pleasure, such servitude from a lovely young lady as Maxine. He enslaved her heart and subjugated her to his will. He got a thrill from the power he had over her. "Treat a whore like a lady and a lady like a whore," his pappy would always say -- and the way he treated this beautiful young lady was proof Karl hung onto his Pappy`s every word. Little did Karl nor Maxine know that before that warm, sunny, pastoral day ended that both their lives would be terribly altered for life.
Unfortunately Karl never knew love nor understood it and mistook the loving actions of Maxine as being weak and pathetic. In fact he had become cloy with her constant doting and it was making him angry -- she was passionate in the sack and that was the only thing that kept him there. But there was a feeling that Karl had never felt before when Maxine was around, a feeling that Karl was too much of a coward to introspect on. It was the feeling of love, but for a guy like Karl, love can quickly turn to hatred … And an undeserving Maxine was about to become a target for that hatred.
Although Karl`s memory is vague, he can still hear Maxine`s words ring in his ears "Oh, baby, please, please pull out before you do -- we`re not protected."
Next Karl can hear himself thinking in response, "Hell with you b*tch I`m not pulling out now .. Protection`s your problem not mine!!"
Karl is yanked from his orgasmic fog by Maxine`s protest "Karl!!!! I asked you to pull out!! I said we are not protected -- It `s that time of the month! My God, Karl, I can get pregnant!"
Then Maxine sees the true Karl and becomes the object of Karl`s fury, "F^@k you B*tch you forgot to protect yourself but still want too get laid? I figured whores like you had that all figured out. Oh, don`t look so shocked. I can tell you`re a whore by the way you love it so and do it anyway I say. Puuuuuuhlease like I`m going to bring a slut like you home to my mother -- yeah right. In fact I`m surprised you even kiss your father with that mouth considering where it`s been. Puuuuhlease, you weren`t even that good either …. I can do better … I done with you … you`re disgusting … I`m out of here!"
With her heart broken by the vile words of Karl and his contemptuous selfish actions, rage wells up inside Maxine that makes her lash out at Karl by scratching his face and making it bleed and she screams, "KARL YOU BASTARD HOW CRUEL OF YOU!!!!" With that Karl, shocked that this bitch had the nerve to strike him, fills with such rage that his raw juvenile impulses can`t be controlled and in that instant a poor undeserving Maxine is subjected to something that she has never been subjected to before -- a violent closed fist beating. It was so violent that it left bruises on her eyes, a bloody nose and mouth and even broke her good luck horseshoe necklace. Luck for Maxine would not be around that day ...
As Karl leaves Maxine by the riverside taking his haughty strides back to his pickup truck, Maxine`s blames herself for the facial beating she took from Karl and pleads for him not to leave, pleas for explanations and even forgiveness go unnoticed. For Karl, it is only wailing sobs and cries that become his last memory of Maxine.
Karl can still hear Maxine`s pitiful cries of, "Kaaaaarrrrl! Come back! I`m sorry!!!!! Don`t leave meeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!"