Bad Composition

This photo started out as 3 exposures -2,0,+2 then end result was something I didn't really like. I then came across another photographer while looking at comments on the local Flickr page. I noticed his first picture was something I liked. In fact, it had a lot of things I liked. I proceeded to try my take at recreating that, but with my own photo. Here is the photo/painting/person Marty Hogan

I believe it looks better in the Lightbox so be sure to press L and let me know. :)

Done