Replacement for vulnerable?

Remember the feeling vulnerable?

www.flickr.com/photos/artmind_etcetera/3195695093/in/set-...

Well, it doesn't work when the piece is fired so I had to come up with another design.

I do like the fact that eggs are vulnerable so I wanted to represent it this way. What do you think?

Is the cut too clean or does it need a more 'Calimero'-effect? :)

Thanks for your opinioin!

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