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[He looks aside,/remembering nights he's thrown straw to choke the chainrace/ piled meal on the stones to slow them/ ground glass into the brake]

 

This is a version of Turndust, an artist's book project I am currently working on. This is an early stage 'storyboard' version. I've posted it because I am interested in seing if I can use community on Flickr to add something to the design process. What do you think of it? What could be improved? What's good? What does it make you think about?

 

I'm planning to develop the book for screenprint in one or two colours with hand colouring in watercolour, so each book will be a little different, although still part of an edition. I plan to include new versions and working-up on Flickr as I go along.

 

Since this book is intended as a narrative, it's best read from beginning to end. I recommend looking at the set.

 

Thanks for any comments.

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