School Value (responsibility)

theme: locked up

 

meta data

ISO:1600

Fnumber: 5.6

Shutter Speed: 1/2500

 

what you like about the photo (not just one sentence, remember the examples)

what i like:

1. i like the angle of the photo, i like how we can see off down till the end of the hallway.

2. i like how the lock is in the rule if thirds. the lock being in the rule fo thirds really created a focus point.

3. i like how as the photo gose offinto the distance it gets blurryer. this mild shallow depth of feild really makes the lock even more of a focus point.

 

what you would like to improve on the photo if you were to do it again. (remember, this need to look like the example in DPS, this is being graded separately than the photo itself)

what i could improve on:

1. i dont like how the photo seems ot be a little bit tilted. if i were to straighten that up i think it would create a much better photo.

2. i dont like the lighting in thi photo. if i were to bring the exposure up and let a little more light in, i think the photo would look much better.

3. i dont like the destracting posters i the end lockers. if i were to tild the photo in a little more it would eleminate the destraction.

Done