Other Emily
Screen shot 2012-04-25 at 3.48.54 AM
Gotta say, I think this is too much. I think maybe lowering the white transparency so it doesn't cut off the print so much might be a good way to go. The subtitle can have it's own white blotch to go behind it.
How's the direction going? Does it look more like an improvement other than the weird chopped up print? Do you like the larger orang, title text, and red color blotch?
I'm trying to listen to all your guys' suggestions. Thank you for them. I really appreciate it.
Screen shot 2012-04-25 at 3.48.54 AM
Gotta say, I think this is too much. I think maybe lowering the white transparency so it doesn't cut off the print so much might be a good way to go. The subtitle can have it's own white blotch to go behind it.
How's the direction going? Does it look more like an improvement other than the weird chopped up print? Do you like the larger orang, title text, and red color blotch?
I'm trying to listen to all your guys' suggestions. Thank you for them. I really appreciate it.