animal drawing

I'm trying to learn how to draw animals and so I started drawing a cheetah! one because it has a small muzzle and those are easy starters. This is my second drawing of a cheetah ever so it's not bad! but my first one is trial and error on the one sheet of paper i have, and when I draw for the second time i give myself notes on what to work on (which is a lot on this one) and so i draw a few pictures, note myself, and work on what I need to work on. please! i need feedback! :D how do you think i did for my second try?

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