gropius81
Project 1.2 - Concept Board
Some fantastic images, however the colours are rather intense and by including some paler tones to balance it out you would project a more light and airy appearance, think how you would translate the colour balance of your images into a scheme. There is enough coral colour in the images and the picture of the girl isn`t necessary as she looks out of context against the wonderful natural and textural qualities that are in the other pictures, perhaps something that was more relaxed and less glamorous would be more appropriate. The chrome isn`t necessary either, as the 3 main images are so evocative and textural they have more powerful impact and have much stronger theme.
A very professionally mounted presentation that is neatly set out and correctly labelled. I find the coral colour rather overpowering and perhaps using a paler grey or less intense colour for your title block and boarders would tone it down slightly.
16/20
Project 1.2 - Concept Board
Some fantastic images, however the colours are rather intense and by including some paler tones to balance it out you would project a more light and airy appearance, think how you would translate the colour balance of your images into a scheme. There is enough coral colour in the images and the picture of the girl isn`t necessary as she looks out of context against the wonderful natural and textural qualities that are in the other pictures, perhaps something that was more relaxed and less glamorous would be more appropriate. The chrome isn`t necessary either, as the 3 main images are so evocative and textural they have more powerful impact and have much stronger theme.
A very professionally mounted presentation that is neatly set out and correctly labelled. I find the coral colour rather overpowering and perhaps using a paler grey or less intense colour for your title block and boarders would tone it down slightly.
16/20