Please Help! Ayuda por favor! See description. :)

Dear friends of Flickr, I know that the photo I posted before is the one that meets the requirement’s of this MMS. However I would appreciate it if you would make me honest comments about my abstract deconstructivist attempt, does it contribute? You live more sensory mind? Transmits more than the previous one? And finally it is valid in MMS? Thank you so much!!! :)

Olympus & 60 mms macro.

Done