Tanny Tans
The unexpected Chapter 5– The Call~Markus
Okay, so I haven't written in like 2-3 months or so and man, I missed it! But I have changed a lot of things. First off I changed the narration, it'll be a different person every once and a while right now it's Markus as you can see! So it'll be real slangy BTW it's super fun to write as Markus so I'll do it a lot! OH and it's now based in 60s-70s around there. And critiques are welcomed (i would appreciate them actually) And sorry it's a lil long OKAY let's get started===================================================
"pick up the phone man," Cole said
I told Cole "I'd rather not, I ain't getting up to answer no phone when it's probably just em' bums from the station." I've been gettin' hassled by the officers around town lately. They never liked me, well I guess I didn't expect them to love me or nothin', but they never got off my case about things I didn't do. Like this one time some chick snuck out a bottle of rum from a gas station down by the strip mall I hung around, when them cops showed up they didn't question her or nothin' they went straight to me. It's not like I was the biggest troublemaker neither, I guess I had the look of a common delinquent.
"Fine, I'mma answer it! but if it's the cops I'm not bailing you out."
"Man, why not? All I did was help clean out the aisles at the pawnshop, I ain't hurt nobody." Cole rolled his eyes. Man, I hated it when people rolled their eyes at me, I can't explain it, it almost felt like they didn't respect me or didn't care about my opinion or something..but I decided to let it fly.
"But still, you better watch it." He said While picking up the phone.
"Hello? Hello, Hello, HELLO?!? All I hear is breathi–"
"You know what? It's probably that dude next door, he's always high out of his mind!"
"Okay! you can shut up now." Cole listened very closely and heard.
"I can't talk very loud….Just get here now, Tod's tryna' kill me. He broke a window and I think he's in the house" It was Alex
"Man we gotta' go, Alex is in deep shit right now," Cole said while he hung up the phone.
"Well, what did he say?" I asked
"What do you mean what did he say? Just get off the couch and let's go!"
"Whoah whoah whoah, slow down, cars…we ain't got none"
"we could walk?" Cole glanced at my face, and I was smirkin' like I had just done something I wasn't supposed to and I just knew my eyes glowed with excitement.
"Nah, you ain't thinking–"
"Come on! Just you and me fooling around stealing a car, and the only cop after you right now is Sandy, and she's a real dingbat!" Cole scratched his neck.
"Alright, but hurry up! Alex could be dead already!"
I sure do love stealing things, I haven't much lately I really don't know why, it's probably because Hayden's always schooling me about stuff like that, if I wanted a weed or somthin' he'd tell me one day I'd go to jail and they'd never see me again. I ain't scared of bars on windows or nothin' I just thought it'd be easier to avoid the arguments with Hayden...
We ran down to Old John's Car Rentals and hopped into a lil ol' Cadillac, I knew how to start em' cars without keys, that was one thing my old man did teach me.
"woohoo" I screamed
"Put a cork in it, we don't want the whole neighborhood hearing us."
For a second I forgot where Alex had lived, but then I remembered. It was I nice little house, I really didn't like nice houses I always felt if I sat down on the sofa there’d be a great big stain or a pile of gunk where I was siting.
"Uhh, I don't know where I'm goin' Cole," I said nervously My hands were shaking, I didn't know why, and I ain't afraid of Tod or Aran, so there was no need to be scared.
"Just go straight! Remember by the lake? And hurry up, Alex is in trouble!"
"Yeah yeah, princess, don't get your panties in I wad willya'." I and Cole chuckled for a while. When we finally got to Alex's house it looked like nobody been there for months. We went around back to look for an open door when we saw a window had been smashed, and it had this goop leaking out the sides of it. I thought it was the insulation melting or somthin'.
"I ain't crawling through that." He said
"You got a better plan?"He finally warmed up to the goopy, broken, window so we climbed inside and walked around looking to see where Alex could be. I decided to snoop around upstairs, I carefully walking up the carpeted stairs, I was worried I'd leave a stain where I was walking. The walls were covered in yellow wallpaper and family pictures, I felt my eyes hurtin' I thought it was just some sort of fancy cleaner they used. I went into Alex's room and checked in the closet.
"Hey! I found him!" I yelled, Alex was curled up staring at the wall, I wasn't real sure what to do sense Cole still hadn't come upstairs yet. He pulled me down close to him by the collar of my jacket and said
"It's the Rashense"
"Wait, what are you talkin' ‘bout man?" I asked
"It's in the walls…" Then he went out cold, I had no idea what he was talking about, but we brought him to a clinic because he didn't look so hot.
"I guess we just missed Tod and Aran," Cole said, I didn't reply I was too busy thinking about what Alex said to me.
If you read thanks! Hope y'all liked it! peace!!
The unexpected Chapter 5– The Call~Markus
Okay, so I haven't written in like 2-3 months or so and man, I missed it! But I have changed a lot of things. First off I changed the narration, it'll be a different person every once and a while right now it's Markus as you can see! So it'll be real slangy BTW it's super fun to write as Markus so I'll do it a lot! OH and it's now based in 60s-70s around there. And critiques are welcomed (i would appreciate them actually) And sorry it's a lil long OKAY let's get started===================================================
"pick up the phone man," Cole said
I told Cole "I'd rather not, I ain't getting up to answer no phone when it's probably just em' bums from the station." I've been gettin' hassled by the officers around town lately. They never liked me, well I guess I didn't expect them to love me or nothin', but they never got off my case about things I didn't do. Like this one time some chick snuck out a bottle of rum from a gas station down by the strip mall I hung around, when them cops showed up they didn't question her or nothin' they went straight to me. It's not like I was the biggest troublemaker neither, I guess I had the look of a common delinquent.
"Fine, I'mma answer it! but if it's the cops I'm not bailing you out."
"Man, why not? All I did was help clean out the aisles at the pawnshop, I ain't hurt nobody." Cole rolled his eyes. Man, I hated it when people rolled their eyes at me, I can't explain it, it almost felt like they didn't respect me or didn't care about my opinion or something..but I decided to let it fly.
"But still, you better watch it." He said While picking up the phone.
"Hello? Hello, Hello, HELLO?!? All I hear is breathi–"
"You know what? It's probably that dude next door, he's always high out of his mind!"
"Okay! you can shut up now." Cole listened very closely and heard.
"I can't talk very loud….Just get here now, Tod's tryna' kill me. He broke a window and I think he's in the house" It was Alex
"Man we gotta' go, Alex is in deep shit right now," Cole said while he hung up the phone.
"Well, what did he say?" I asked
"What do you mean what did he say? Just get off the couch and let's go!"
"Whoah whoah whoah, slow down, cars…we ain't got none"
"we could walk?" Cole glanced at my face, and I was smirkin' like I had just done something I wasn't supposed to and I just knew my eyes glowed with excitement.
"Nah, you ain't thinking–"
"Come on! Just you and me fooling around stealing a car, and the only cop after you right now is Sandy, and she's a real dingbat!" Cole scratched his neck.
"Alright, but hurry up! Alex could be dead already!"
I sure do love stealing things, I haven't much lately I really don't know why, it's probably because Hayden's always schooling me about stuff like that, if I wanted a weed or somthin' he'd tell me one day I'd go to jail and they'd never see me again. I ain't scared of bars on windows or nothin' I just thought it'd be easier to avoid the arguments with Hayden...
We ran down to Old John's Car Rentals and hopped into a lil ol' Cadillac, I knew how to start em' cars without keys, that was one thing my old man did teach me.
"woohoo" I screamed
"Put a cork in it, we don't want the whole neighborhood hearing us."
For a second I forgot where Alex had lived, but then I remembered. It was I nice little house, I really didn't like nice houses I always felt if I sat down on the sofa there’d be a great big stain or a pile of gunk where I was siting.
"Uhh, I don't know where I'm goin' Cole," I said nervously My hands were shaking, I didn't know why, and I ain't afraid of Tod or Aran, so there was no need to be scared.
"Just go straight! Remember by the lake? And hurry up, Alex is in trouble!"
"Yeah yeah, princess, don't get your panties in I wad willya'." I and Cole chuckled for a while. When we finally got to Alex's house it looked like nobody been there for months. We went around back to look for an open door when we saw a window had been smashed, and it had this goop leaking out the sides of it. I thought it was the insulation melting or somthin'.
"I ain't crawling through that." He said
"You got a better plan?"He finally warmed up to the goopy, broken, window so we climbed inside and walked around looking to see where Alex could be. I decided to snoop around upstairs, I carefully walking up the carpeted stairs, I was worried I'd leave a stain where I was walking. The walls were covered in yellow wallpaper and family pictures, I felt my eyes hurtin' I thought it was just some sort of fancy cleaner they used. I went into Alex's room and checked in the closet.
"Hey! I found him!" I yelled, Alex was curled up staring at the wall, I wasn't real sure what to do sense Cole still hadn't come upstairs yet. He pulled me down close to him by the collar of my jacket and said
"It's the Rashense"
"Wait, what are you talkin' ‘bout man?" I asked
"It's in the walls…" Then he went out cold, I had no idea what he was talking about, but we brought him to a clinic because he didn't look so hot.
"I guess we just missed Tod and Aran," Cole said, I didn't reply I was too busy thinking about what Alex said to me.
If you read thanks! Hope y'all liked it! peace!!