When I grow up

I met my friend Fabiola yesterday. She is a great photographer and a very good friend. Her work ispered me so much. She looked at my pictures and she was very critic. She told me that I need to work more on the style, on the make up. I need to achieve perfection.I give my self ten days for take new pictures and show her what I improved her lesson. I care about her opinion and I want her approval. That's the first picture after our meeting.

 

Please be critic, help me to achieve perfection.

 

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