The-Wing-Ding
Amazing Spiderman #1-Blending In
You know, New York looks pretty peaceful when you’re swinging through it, which I’ve been doing for a couple months now. Amazing to think that this is my life now. To put it simply my name is Peter Parker, and I am the Amazing Spiderman! It’s my last night before spring break is over and all I want is some action, so where can I find some? Suddenly I feel alert, I guess my “Spidey Senses” patent pending, are ringing. Just the thing I’m looking for as I swing from building to building leading me to the source, I let the wind crash against my body as It speeds through the air, there isn’t a better feeling in the entire world.
Empire State University, home to two types of great minds, the old ones teaching, and the new ones learning, funny how my senses led me here, must be something going on, and conveniently the window’s open. Going in I see a bad sign, a K.O.’d guard laying on the floor with a chair next to him.
Now what happened here buddy?" he's out cold, no use in talking to him. Then I hear footsteps coming from the other room, so I fire a web on the ceiling and climb up. Out steps a man in a black suit, and tie with an ID card, a staff member? Then he pulls out a gun as he looks around, so obviously not staff.
“Hey down there, why don’t you put the stolen goods down and we can talk!” He looks up in the air and sees me, quickly he pulls up his gun.
BANG
As I leap from the ceiling to the ground I fire some webbing at his face, but something weird happens, it rips off.
“Hey buddy, it isn’t Haloween for a couple more months” I then fire another web at him, knocking his body back before he can regain his stability. I charge at him with full force, but he knocks me to the ground.
“Listen, I can tell you’re probably a minor from that voice of yours but you’re interfering with business, and I can’t let that slide, no one messes with the Chameleon” he says coldly with a Russian accent. The only thing louder than that in the room is the click of the hammer as his hand pulls it back. Realizing I only have a couple seconds to act I pull my fingers back while bringing them up, it’s a race against time web shooter vs gun so who’s gonna fire first.
THWIP
BANG
The crook’s hand is knocked up as he fires his pistol, it's ejected from the gun and sent flying over my head, still a close call, the webbing on his hand stunned and distracted him long enough for me to charge into his chest. Normally a 15 year old kid couldn’t do that, but I’m no normal 15 year old kid, probably because of the super strength and wall crawling. The crook raises his free hand to try and fight me off pushing me up, but the webbing on his other hand stops him from doing much. I pounce into his chest while webbing his legs. Then he starts throwing haymakers as he panics so I back up.
“Wow looks like Mr.Ruskie is a little angry why? What did you not get enough Vodka?” then I leap onto him, knocking the wind out and giving me enough time to let my web shooters tie this situation up.
“DAMN YOU AMERICAN KID, YOU’VE MAD A POWERFUL ENEMY, I’LL GET Y-”
THWIP
“Sorry Mister Chameleon but the only way for you to shut up was to web you up, now I hope you clear everything up for the police, okay?” I slink through the window and swing away, glad to have some last action, now it’s time to get back to the normal stuff but first I got to get past Aunt May.
Once I’m in Queens get changed into casual clothes like jeans and t shirt and walk in. I don’t see her right away so I go to the kitchen, bills are pilled as usual it pains me to see but there’s not much we can do. Ever since Uncle Ben died we haven’t had much extra income and money’s been tight but I don’t know what do to.
“Peter, are you downstairs?”
“Yeah May, just got home” she walks down the stairs and hugs me, she looks tired probably from seeing all those bills.
“I got some chicken and rice I can make, it’ll be done soon.”
“Thanks May, love ya” I walk into my room and put the Spidey suit away. I lay on my bed and let out a deep breath. Tomorrow school starts again and my schedule’s cramped once more. On the bright side I get to see my friends again, and more importantly Liz Allen, I had some luck with her last year but I think this might be where I get lucky. Overall life’s pretty great, I got some good friends, a loving Aunt, and most importantly I was gifted these great powers to become the “Amazing Spiderman.”
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So that was part one, hoped you enjoyed, now as this is my first story in a while and first Spidey story I'd like to get your guy's input on what you liked, didn't like and anything you'd like to see in the future like plots, minor details, characters to see what ideas I should use first. Anyways thanks a lot guys and as always take care.
Amazing Spiderman #1-Blending In
You know, New York looks pretty peaceful when you’re swinging through it, which I’ve been doing for a couple months now. Amazing to think that this is my life now. To put it simply my name is Peter Parker, and I am the Amazing Spiderman! It’s my last night before spring break is over and all I want is some action, so where can I find some? Suddenly I feel alert, I guess my “Spidey Senses” patent pending, are ringing. Just the thing I’m looking for as I swing from building to building leading me to the source, I let the wind crash against my body as It speeds through the air, there isn’t a better feeling in the entire world.
Empire State University, home to two types of great minds, the old ones teaching, and the new ones learning, funny how my senses led me here, must be something going on, and conveniently the window’s open. Going in I see a bad sign, a K.O.’d guard laying on the floor with a chair next to him.
Now what happened here buddy?" he's out cold, no use in talking to him. Then I hear footsteps coming from the other room, so I fire a web on the ceiling and climb up. Out steps a man in a black suit, and tie with an ID card, a staff member? Then he pulls out a gun as he looks around, so obviously not staff.
“Hey down there, why don’t you put the stolen goods down and we can talk!” He looks up in the air and sees me, quickly he pulls up his gun.
BANG
As I leap from the ceiling to the ground I fire some webbing at his face, but something weird happens, it rips off.
“Hey buddy, it isn’t Haloween for a couple more months” I then fire another web at him, knocking his body back before he can regain his stability. I charge at him with full force, but he knocks me to the ground.
“Listen, I can tell you’re probably a minor from that voice of yours but you’re interfering with business, and I can’t let that slide, no one messes with the Chameleon” he says coldly with a Russian accent. The only thing louder than that in the room is the click of the hammer as his hand pulls it back. Realizing I only have a couple seconds to act I pull my fingers back while bringing them up, it’s a race against time web shooter vs gun so who’s gonna fire first.
THWIP
BANG
The crook’s hand is knocked up as he fires his pistol, it's ejected from the gun and sent flying over my head, still a close call, the webbing on his hand stunned and distracted him long enough for me to charge into his chest. Normally a 15 year old kid couldn’t do that, but I’m no normal 15 year old kid, probably because of the super strength and wall crawling. The crook raises his free hand to try and fight me off pushing me up, but the webbing on his other hand stops him from doing much. I pounce into his chest while webbing his legs. Then he starts throwing haymakers as he panics so I back up.
“Wow looks like Mr.Ruskie is a little angry why? What did you not get enough Vodka?” then I leap onto him, knocking the wind out and giving me enough time to let my web shooters tie this situation up.
“DAMN YOU AMERICAN KID, YOU’VE MAD A POWERFUL ENEMY, I’LL GET Y-”
THWIP
“Sorry Mister Chameleon but the only way for you to shut up was to web you up, now I hope you clear everything up for the police, okay?” I slink through the window and swing away, glad to have some last action, now it’s time to get back to the normal stuff but first I got to get past Aunt May.
Once I’m in Queens get changed into casual clothes like jeans and t shirt and walk in. I don’t see her right away so I go to the kitchen, bills are pilled as usual it pains me to see but there’s not much we can do. Ever since Uncle Ben died we haven’t had much extra income and money’s been tight but I don’t know what do to.
“Peter, are you downstairs?”
“Yeah May, just got home” she walks down the stairs and hugs me, she looks tired probably from seeing all those bills.
“I got some chicken and rice I can make, it’ll be done soon.”
“Thanks May, love ya” I walk into my room and put the Spidey suit away. I lay on my bed and let out a deep breath. Tomorrow school starts again and my schedule’s cramped once more. On the bright side I get to see my friends again, and more importantly Liz Allen, I had some luck with her last year but I think this might be where I get lucky. Overall life’s pretty great, I got some good friends, a loving Aunt, and most importantly I was gifted these great powers to become the “Amazing Spiderman.”
__________________________________________
So that was part one, hoped you enjoyed, now as this is my first story in a while and first Spidey story I'd like to get your guy's input on what you liked, didn't like and anything you'd like to see in the future like plots, minor details, characters to see what ideas I should use first. Anyways thanks a lot guys and as always take care.