Lydia Pointon
Iteration
This was my original 'final' version of my infographic. However upon reflection and criticism from flatmates etc I felt that by making the composition quite so wavy and organic some of its coherence was lost. I didn't really want to change the curved dotted lines however and so I felt a better idea would be to add some arrows that indicate direction so that the sense of time is easier to understand.
Iteration
This was my original 'final' version of my infographic. However upon reflection and criticism from flatmates etc I felt that by making the composition quite so wavy and organic some of its coherence was lost. I didn't really want to change the curved dotted lines however and so I felt a better idea would be to add some arrows that indicate direction so that the sense of time is easier to understand.