Susan Bocock
Variation on a theme mono2
As part of my course I need peer feedback. I submitted an image at the critique night and this is the version taking into account comments received. I have straightened, sharpened and modified to black and white. Unfortunately I cannot get any more of the legs in as there is a wall in the way! I would appreciate critique even if it is "delete and start again" as I was thinking of putting this into the course exhibition. Many thanks.
Variation on a theme mono2
As part of my course I need peer feedback. I submitted an image at the critique night and this is the version taking into account comments received. I have straightened, sharpened and modified to black and white. Unfortunately I cannot get any more of the legs in as there is a wall in the way! I would appreciate critique even if it is "delete and start again" as I was thinking of putting this into the course exhibition. Many thanks.