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Daredevil - Pt. 0 - Anatrofí̱ Pt. 1 (App)
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"What brings you here so late, Murdock. And what happened to your eye?"
"It's a long story, Father."
"Listening to stories is part of my job, Matt."
"Well, uh, I guess this all started when I was twelve. You know. That night. Anyways, that night filled me with so much rage and a craving for vengeance. I thought it was unfair what they did to my dad. He won fair and square. But maybe that's what they were angry about... Anyways, I'll skip forward a bit. I don't want to bore you with my story. I wouldn't want to put you to sleep."
"Alright, go on."
"I returned to Hell's Kitchen just two years ago. Foggy and I were just itching to make a name for ourselves as attorneys. We were doing good until our clients were beginning to disappear. I... uh, tried to track them down."
"What would you, a blind man, do if you found them?"
"Foggy asked that too. I didn't know myself. Anyways, I was successful. There was a lead that one of Foggy's friends had, he's a cop by the way. So, I dressed up in padded clothes and wore a mask. I don't know what I was thinking. When I got there I snuck in to the building and was lucky enough to take two down by knocking them out with two wooden sticks I found. The third, however, heard me and booked it out of the building. I chased him to an alley that had a dead end. He grabbed a crowbar and tried swing it at me. I successfully blocked him and hit him down to the ground. I asked who had him take my clients, and he wouldn't talk. So I took a drastic turn and snapped his arm. He squealed like a pig."
"Who was it?"
"He said some man that goes by the name 'Kingpin.' I have no idea who that is though, and neither did he."
"So you're asking forgiveness for what you did to those men?"
"No. I do not regret what I did to them. In fact, secretly, that's one reason why I came back. To right the wrongs in this forsaken city."
"I do not understand. If you are not here for forgiveness, why'd you come here?"
"Because, right now. You're the only person I can talk to and know they won't try to tell the police."
The priest smiles at my last point and looks up.
"You... I knew you had a sense of humor. I didn't know just how cruel it could be."
Police sirens go off and I hear faint screaming about a block away.
"Well, I must get going. My city needs me."
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Well, I guess this app needs an explanation. If you didn't know, Payton (Nexus), dropped the Daredevil role, and I dropped Constantine. (let the "you should've done Static" comments role in). Honestly I lost interest in the story. The story not the character mind you. And once Payton dropped DD I knew what I wanted to do. So here's my app.
Also addressing the potential Static comments. Honestly I feel like I would have lost interest in the story much quicker.
Daredevil - Pt. 0 - Anatrofí̱ Pt. 1 (App)
[]Please comment if you favorite[]
"What brings you here so late, Murdock. And what happened to your eye?"
"It's a long story, Father."
"Listening to stories is part of my job, Matt."
"Well, uh, I guess this all started when I was twelve. You know. That night. Anyways, that night filled me with so much rage and a craving for vengeance. I thought it was unfair what they did to my dad. He won fair and square. But maybe that's what they were angry about... Anyways, I'll skip forward a bit. I don't want to bore you with my story. I wouldn't want to put you to sleep."
"Alright, go on."
"I returned to Hell's Kitchen just two years ago. Foggy and I were just itching to make a name for ourselves as attorneys. We were doing good until our clients were beginning to disappear. I... uh, tried to track them down."
"What would you, a blind man, do if you found them?"
"Foggy asked that too. I didn't know myself. Anyways, I was successful. There was a lead that one of Foggy's friends had, he's a cop by the way. So, I dressed up in padded clothes and wore a mask. I don't know what I was thinking. When I got there I snuck in to the building and was lucky enough to take two down by knocking them out with two wooden sticks I found. The third, however, heard me and booked it out of the building. I chased him to an alley that had a dead end. He grabbed a crowbar and tried swing it at me. I successfully blocked him and hit him down to the ground. I asked who had him take my clients, and he wouldn't talk. So I took a drastic turn and snapped his arm. He squealed like a pig."
"Who was it?"
"He said some man that goes by the name 'Kingpin.' I have no idea who that is though, and neither did he."
"So you're asking forgiveness for what you did to those men?"
"No. I do not regret what I did to them. In fact, secretly, that's one reason why I came back. To right the wrongs in this forsaken city."
"I do not understand. If you are not here for forgiveness, why'd you come here?"
"Because, right now. You're the only person I can talk to and know they won't try to tell the police."
The priest smiles at my last point and looks up.
"You... I knew you had a sense of humor. I didn't know just how cruel it could be."
Police sirens go off and I hear faint screaming about a block away.
"Well, I must get going. My city needs me."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well, I guess this app needs an explanation. If you didn't know, Payton (Nexus), dropped the Daredevil role, and I dropped Constantine. (let the "you should've done Static" comments role in). Honestly I lost interest in the story. The story not the character mind you. And once Payton dropped DD I knew what I wanted to do. So here's my app.
Also addressing the potential Static comments. Honestly I feel like I would have lost interest in the story much quicker.