feedback---double-page-spread

These are the feedbacks I recieved from for the Double page spread.

I have taken into account the feedback's I recieved from this. Because of time, I can only make limited chages.

The changes I plan to make is:

- to change the picture on page 10

- to change the sentences in the red box

 

Unfortunatly there isn't enough time to chage the layout of the title. This is somethig I would experiement with if I had enough time

Done