Noel Bright
Outdoor
Strength: completely level horizon line
Weakness: The lighthouse is only partly on the rule of thirds. It should either be in the middle or directly on the rule of thirds. I should have taken a step or two to the right to fix this.
Weakness: There should be more ground space at the bottom of the image. The slight sliver that is there doesn't balance well with the huge expanse of sky. Moving farther back would have enabled me to capture the whole lighthouse and more of the ground.
Weakness: The fence in the lower right hand corner leaves a sliver of a triangle at the bottom that is distracting and makes the image seem slightly tilted. Stepping back to incorporate more of the ground would have solved this.
Strength: minimal distracting elements
Outdoor
Strength: completely level horizon line
Weakness: The lighthouse is only partly on the rule of thirds. It should either be in the middle or directly on the rule of thirds. I should have taken a step or two to the right to fix this.
Weakness: There should be more ground space at the bottom of the image. The slight sliver that is there doesn't balance well with the huge expanse of sky. Moving farther back would have enabled me to capture the whole lighthouse and more of the ground.
Weakness: The fence in the lower right hand corner leaves a sliver of a triangle at the bottom that is distracting and makes the image seem slightly tilted. Stepping back to incorporate more of the ground would have solved this.
Strength: minimal distracting elements